Mei and the Boy Who Loved His Reflection
by
Patches the Story Dog
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Mei loved to draw. She carried her sketchbook everywhere—to school, to the park, and especially into the woods behind her house. While other kids collected rocks or chased butterflies, Mei collected moments. She sketched the way light fell through leaves, the curve of a robin's wing, and the shadows that danced across the forest floor. "If I draw it," she often whispered to herself, "then I'll remember how it made me feel."
One warm afternoon, Mei wandered deeper into the woods than she had ever gone before. The trees grew taller, and the air smelled like honey and wet earth. Then, without warning, the tangled path opened into a glade so beautiful that Mei stopped breathing for a moment. Ancient oak trees circled the clearing like wise old guards. Wildflowers in every color dotted the mossy ground, and right in the center sat a shimmering pond, perfectly still, like a mirror made of glass.
Mei settled onto a worn wooden bench at the edge of the glade and opened her sketchbook. She began to draw the pond, trying to capture how the water reflected the sky like a painting turned upside down. But as her pencil moved, she heard something strange—a voice, soft and sad, drifting through the air like a fading song. "Hello?" Mei called out. "...Hello?" the voice echoed back, thin as a whisper.
Mei crept toward the great oak tree at the water's edge, where twisted roots rose out of the ground like giant fingers. There, huddled behind the roots, sat a girl about Mei's age. She had pale skin, sad eyes, and a mouth that moved as though it wanted to say a thousand things but couldn't. "My name is Mei," Mei said gently. "What's yours?" The girl opened her mouth, and after a long pause, whispered, "...yours." Mei tilted her head. Something was very wrong.
"Can you tell me your name?" Mei tried again. "...your name," the girl repeated, her voice trembling like a leaf in the wind. Then Mei understood. This girl could only repeat the last words that someone else said. She couldn't speak her own thoughts at all. Mei's heart ached. "That must be so lonely," she said softly. "...so lonely," the girl echoed, and a single tear slid down her cheek. Mei decided right then that she would call this girl Echo, because that was all her voice could do.
A sudden splash made both girls turn toward the pond. There, kneeling at the water's edge, was the most beautiful boy Mei had ever seen. His golden hair caught the sunlight, and his eyes were bright as polished gems. But he wasn't looking at Mei or Echo. He was staring straight down into the water, gazing at his own reflection with a dreamy, faraway smile. "Excuse me," Mei called. The boy didn't move. "You're so perfect," he murmured to the face in the water. "...perfect," Echo whispered sadly from behind the roots.
"His name is Narcissus," Echo managed to repeat from words she had once heard spoken long ago. Mei walked closer and waved her hand. "Narcissus? Hi! I'm Mei, and this is Echo. She'd really like to talk to you." Narcissus barely glanced up. "Why would I look at anyone else," he said lazily, "when I can look at this?" He pointed at his reflection and sighed with admiration. Mei frowned. She looked back at Echo, who was pressing herself against the tree roots as though she wished she could disappear completely.
"Don't you see what you're doing?" Mei asked, crouching beside Narcissus. "Echo wants to be your friend, but you won't even look at her. You're so busy admiring yourself that you're hurting her feelings." Narcissus shrugged. "I can't help it if I'm the most beautiful thing in this glade." "...in this glade," Echo repeated quietly, and her voice cracked. Mei bit her lip. Talking wasn't working. Narcissus heard only himself. She needed to try something different—something he could actually see.
Mei hurried back to the wooden bench and grabbed her sketchbook. Her pencil flew across the page. She drew Narcissus first—not the dazzling reflection he saw in the water, but the boy she saw from where she stood. She drew his turned back, his hunched shoulders, and his eyes locked downward, missing everything around him. Then, beside him, she drew Echo—reaching out a hand that no one took, her mouth open with words she could never say. Between them, Mei left an empty space. It looked exactly like loneliness.
Mei carried the drawing to the pond and held it right above the water, blocking Narcissus's view of his reflection. "Move that!" he snapped. But then his eyes focused on the sketch, and his breath caught. The boy in the picture wasn't beautiful. He was lonely—completely, terribly alone, even though someone who cared about him stood right beside him. "Is that really how I look?" he whispered. "...how I look," Echo repeated from behind the tree, but this time her voice sounded hopeful. Narcissus looked up from the drawing—and for the first time, he truly saw Echo.
Narcissus stood up slowly, leaving his reflection behind in the water. He walked toward Echo, and for the first time, he really looked at her—not at himself, not at the pond, but at her. "I'm sorry," he said quietly. "I was so busy staring at myself that I forgot to see anyone else." "...anyone else," Echo whispered, but she smiled as she said it. Mei quickly sketched a new drawing: Narcissus and Echo standing side by side, not as reflections, but as friends. This time, there was no empty space between them.
As the sun began to set and the glade turned amber and gold, the three of them sat together on the worn wooden bench. Narcissus told stories, and Echo repeated the endings, which made everyone laugh. Mei drew them all—together. Before she left, Mei looked back at the shimmering pond one last time. It was still beautiful, still perfectly still. But she knew now that the most beautiful thing in the glade had never been a reflection. It was the moment someone stopped looking at themselves and started seeing everyone else. And that, Mei thought as she tucked her sketchbook under her arm, was something truly worth drawing.